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Emma was 25 and although she was in her mid-twenties she radiated youthful joy. She was originally from Vermont and had moved to the London in order to pursue her dream of working at the Museum of Natural History. She loved history and getting lost in stories from times long ago. She felt like it was the closest thing to time travel and when she visited London her senior year in college she knew she wanted to work at her favorite museum. Her grandmother had recently passed away and left her apartment in Piccadilly Circus to her so it seemed like fate brought her to the city in a way. It took her a while to figure out the subway system and get used to the city but now she felt almost like a local.
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What James and Emma didn't realize was that they were almost perfect for each other.
Emma first saw James when she was walking home from the subway and he was in his car stopped at a red light. Her gaze was drawn to him by some subconscious force. She saw the man in the car looking at the mirror. She thought maybe he was looking to see if he had something in his teeth. Regardless of what he was doing he was beautiful. She was hoping he would notice her but instead he drove off without glancing her way. The next week she saw him again at the cafe near he apartment. She sat down after getting her coffee and noticed him sitting with a friend right in front of her. They were close enough to where she could overhear his conversation with his friend about the recent bonus he had got from redesigning something, she didn't understand all the vocabulary he was using. Once again she was hoping he would notice her but he ended up leaving without breaking his conversation with his friend. The last time Emma saw James was actually when she was walking to the market on a Sunday afternoon. James was crossing the street when he accidentally stepped into a large puddle. It was the kind of puddle where your whole foot is wet up to the top of your ankle. It happened right beside Emma and she couldn't help but smile and laugh a little. James however did not laugh. Instead he scowled at her and told her his shoes were Italian leather and that she probably couldn't imagine how expensive they were. He scoffed off in a hustle before Emma could react.
From that day forward when Emma saw James she made an effort to avoid him at all costs. In fact, they did not ever come in contact with each other again.
If only they had known what they could have been thought Cassandra sitting on the bench in the middle of Piccadilly Circus.
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This was inspired by the story in Ovid's Metamorphoses called Narcissus. Being narcissistic means being absorbed with yourself. In a way a narcissist is constantly consumed with themselves and experiences life solely from their own point of view. In the story about Narcissus he is consumed with himself and his own image that he first notices in the reflection off of water in a pond. He actually falls in love with himself and longs for the image he sees in the mirror. Cassandra is a greek god that was able to see the future that I looked up in order to go along with the story. She is not part of the story Narcissus but she would be someone of the same genre of character.
For some reason I wanted to make this story seem somewhat realistic rather than purely mythological. I have noticed that I have began to write stories like that or at least think like that. A couple summers ago I went to London and saw Piccadilly Circus and the Museum of Natural history and enjoyed them very much. I also really like history and thought it would be interesting to work in a museum where you could learn about a lot of different things. I think in today's day and age it is more often that you run into people that are consumed with themselves and it makes me bummed out. It is very hard to have a conversation with them or have a friendship, which makes me sad because they don't know what they are missing. Relationships with people are the best thing in life and I think by being narcissistic you aren't able to have a true relationship with someone because you are too distracted by your own self.
I chose the images to hopefully help set the scene for the reader and give them and idea of what it might look like. I really like the picture I chose to depict Cassandra sitting and watching the whole story unfold. I wanted her to come off as the old wise lady that was watching the scene in life she had already seen before.
For some reason I wanted to make this story seem somewhat realistic rather than purely mythological. I have noticed that I have began to write stories like that or at least think like that. A couple summers ago I went to London and saw Piccadilly Circus and the Museum of Natural history and enjoyed them very much. I also really like history and thought it would be interesting to work in a museum where you could learn about a lot of different things. I think in today's day and age it is more often that you run into people that are consumed with themselves and it makes me bummed out. It is very hard to have a conversation with them or have a friendship, which makes me sad because they don't know what they are missing. Relationships with people are the best thing in life and I think by being narcissistic you aren't able to have a true relationship with someone because you are too distracted by your own self.
I chose the images to hopefully help set the scene for the reader and give them and idea of what it might look like. I really like the picture I chose to depict Cassandra sitting and watching the whole story unfold. I wanted her to come off as the old wise lady that was watching the scene in life she had already seen before.
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I love how you brought your own experiences into the story! That is fantastic idea to use locations you have visited and loved.
ReplyDeleteYour story makes me actually wonder what WOULD have happened if the two had gotten together. It might make for an interesting alternative story. Overall, I thought it was good and I wish you the best this semester!
I really enjoyed reading your story based off of Ovid's Metamorphoses! I liked how you took a realistic angel to the story instead of a mythological one, since sometimes those can get hard to read and understand. I like the setting in London and love that James seems like a typical city snob with the nice car and the nice Italian leather shoes. The story itself was easy to follow and flowed very well! The only suggestion I have is to maybe elaborate or give a more vivid description of Cassandra. When you referred to Cassandra, I was confused. When I read your author's note, I figured out who she was and what her purpose was, but originally reading the story I did not understand why she was involved. But the author's note definitely helps readers though put all the history and the re-telling of the story together! Great job on the story!
ReplyDeleteHi Steve, this is the second story of yours that I have read, and I enjoyed it just as much as the first one. You are such a good writer! Thanks for sharing. Such a neat way to write by bring personal experiences into it as well. I really like the image you chose, I think it really helps add to the story. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteWow, how cool would it be to live in London for a little?! I have always wanted to visit there and explore the city (hint hint). I kind of feel that I can relate to Emma’s directions ability…. It might take her awhile to learn but she will eventually get them right! I was kind of sad to see that the two didn’t end up together… but then again I am glad that Emma probably found someone better. I really liked this story and am excited to read more of yours in the future (you’re a really good writer and I like your shoes).
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